I can start to see the relationship between the site diagram and the use of spaces. I would also like to see a section (long- showing slope and short)and floor plans.
From this drawing it looks like the program looks a little choppy. I think you should consider a more seamless program layout, and really investigate how a person would experience the functions of the building. The circulation seems to be just plopped in there, which I understand you are doing a quick layout of the locations, but I really think you can make the circulation more integrated and make it move through the program in a more elegant way. It's also hard to tell what part of the building is above ground, and at what point it starts to slope into the ground.
Nice start. Do you also have a quick section?
ReplyDeleteI can start to see the relationship between the site diagram and the use of spaces. I would also like to see a section (long- showing slope and short)and floor plans.
ReplyDeleteFrom this drawing it looks like the program looks a little choppy. I think you should consider a more seamless program layout, and really investigate how a person would experience the functions of the building. The circulation seems to be just plopped in there, which I understand you are doing a quick layout of the locations, but I really think you can make the circulation more integrated and make it move through the program in a more elegant way. It's also hard to tell what part of the building is above ground, and at what point it starts to slope into the ground.
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